In the essay “The Stunt Pilot”
written by Annie Dillard, Dave Rahm’s air shows are described, and his
inspiration to Annie Dillard is expressed.
In the seventh paragraph, Dillard describes the moment where his air
show begins. This passage is very close
to the beginning of the essay and describes the moment she was struck with
inspiration from his skill and relates it to artistic ability. In typical Dillard style, she describes the
moment as an observer in this moment, and later in the essay, continues to
contribute meaning to this impactful scene.
The
artistic diction featured in this passage, emphasizes how Dillard feels about
Rahm’s skill. She states that he “made
beauty with his whole body”. The
movements of his plane move “everyway a line can move, and it controlled three
dimensions”. Dillard sees the air show
as an artistic manipulation of the plane, rather than a stunt. The plane also creates “subtle slits in the
air like sculptures” and is compared to a “gymnast” doing “cartwheels”. All of this diction recreates the visions
Dillard saw, that inspired her so much. It
is an example of her observation which she later develops into a meaningful application
of life.
Dillard’s
use of similes is also frequent in the passage.
By comparing the plane’s movements to so many different things, the
reader gets a sense of how much more could be taken from the air show. The
plane “carved massive and subtle slits in the air like sculptures” which reveals
how graceful the plane’s movements were. Dillard also states that the plane’s looping
arched its back “like a gymnast”.
Comparing the movements to a gymnast also gives a sense of gracefulness,
but it is also interesting because it relates the movements to flexibility and
ease, which is impossible for a fixed and structured machine. The last simile Dillard uses is that the
plane “played with its own line like a cat with yarn”. This gives the entire show a sense of playfulness
and ease that make the movements seem effortless. However, all of these similes are used to
describe the absolute skill and talent of Rahm.
His gracefulness, flexibility, and easy playfulness are obviously
difficult traits to manage when flying in an air show, and Dillard is showing
her appreciation of these skills.
In
the passage’s longest sentence, sentence seven, parallelism is heftily relied
on. After each simile in this sentence,
Dillard follows with an impendent clause, all linked together through
semi-colons. This extremely long
sentence seems to create an effect of holding one’s breath. The semi-colons provide pauses, where more
action is taking place. However, throughout
the entire sentence, Dillard is unable to stop watching or describing the
incredible event. As the audience
watches the plane, “it stalled”, “it spiraled and knifed”, “it turned
cartwheels”, and “it played with its own line”.
All of these actions are reasons for why Dillard can’t end her sentence,
because the plane keeps her surprised and watching.
The
organization of the paragraph is set up so that Dillard can introduce the
moment. She begins with the sentences “The
air show announcer hushed” and “the crowd stilled” so the reader recognizes
this is a moment to pay attention to. The shortness of these sentences also reveal
the anticipation that the crowd and herself were feeling. The
rest of the paragraph is the description of her own observations, and ends with
“How did the pilot know where in the air he was? If he got lost, the ground
would swat him”. These ending phrases
once again reaffirm her amazement she has for Rahm. The last phrase also addresses her awareness
that he is doing something dangerous, which reaffirms her awe for all of his
artistic actions.
This
passage is a perfect representation of how Dillard stylizes her essays. She begins with her own observations, and
tangles them into a web of realizations and life lessons that she reaches by
the end of her essay. In this passage Dillard’s
acute sense of observation is evident, and leads to the beginning of her
conclusions from this inspiring moment.
Works Cited:
Dillard, Annie. "The Stunt Pilot." Ten on Ten: Major Essayists on Recurring Themes. Ed. Robert Atwan. Boston: Bedford of St. Martin's, 1992. 115-25. Print.